Cee challenges us to find pictures of eyes for her Fun Foto Challenge this week. Seeing out of these eyes might be a challenge in itself.
David from The Skeptic Kaddish invites us to create poetry together. The photographs inspired the poem on the topic of poverty, which is another challenging new form for me.







W3 Poetry Prompt from the Skeptic’s Kaddish
This duodora was written in response to Murisopsis’ W3 prompt, which was to write a poem of exactly 14 lines on the theme of poverty (moral, financial, romantic, etc.).
What Is a Duodora?
- A quatorzain (14 lines) made up of 2 septets;
- Syllabic: 4/6/5/5/5/10/10 syllables per line;
- Rhymed Axxxxxb Axxxxxb;
- L1 is repeated as a refrain that begins the 2nd stanza;
- x is unrhymed.
Poverty in the Making
Fancy trinkets questionable value credit card purchases with no thought of thrift squandering assets for necessities not so the poor who count pennies and dimes can't afford to provide trout for a treat Fancy trinkets eyeglasses with rhinestones art lessons and paint dollar for statue an art show delight not so the poor who need dollars and cents sleep in a bag in a tent on the street ©Marsha Ingrao 2023 a duodora
Upcoming and Ongoing on Always Write
- WQ Page NEW CHALLENGE TOPICS FOR 2023
- WQ #1 January 4th: RESOLUTIONS v WORD OF THE YEAR
- WQ #2 January 11: PIQUES INTEREST
- WQ #3 January 18: BELLY LAUGH/WHITE OR GRAY COLOR CHALLENGE ALIGNED WITH SUNDAY STILLS
- WQ #4: January 25: ENVELOPED/WRITER’S CHOICE/DOUBLE DIP CHALLENGES/

34 responses to “CFFC: Turning a Blind Eye”
HI Marsha, a lovely selection of photographs for the theme of eyes. Your two poems are also excellent.
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Thank you so much Robbie.
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So many eyes! And the poem is great, especially given the tight constraints around the form
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Thanks, Sarah. Form poetry can often sound strained. I hope this one doesn’t sound too strained.
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Beautiful photos
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Thanks so much!
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You’re welcome
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You’ve quite a variety of eyes here, Marsha, and well done on the poetry. I haven’t written poetry for too long. Perhaps I’ll try to get going with it again this year.
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There you go. We can have a poetry party while you’re here. 🙂
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🙃
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THOSE EYES!!!!! Love your duodora Marsha and you’re writing poetry more! ❣️
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I have written a ton of it, but I’m going to get back into it more this year.
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I know you were planing on it which is awesome! ❤️
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It’s fun!
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Loved the poem, saving is so incredibly important.
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You always make me smile, Marsha, and sometimes you make me want to stand up and cheer!
I get so befuddled counting syllables that I forget to write words.
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I’m laughing out loud. You are hilarious, Jo.
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🤭💖
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Terrific grouping of eyes Marsha. I enjoyed your entry 😀
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Awww shucks, thank ye kindly. I had fun finding them after seeing your different eyes. Did you like the fish? LOL
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Great collection of images and very nice poems… sad, but really nice.
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Thanks, the prompt took me there – to a sad place. David had a different take on poverty and went to gratitude for what he has each day.
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What a superb collection! The mask is scary, though. Reminds me of Dr Who episode, set in WWII.
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Exactly! They were developed during WWI. By 1938, the British government issued them to citizens in case of gas attacks. Maybe if we had worn these during Covid, we could have eliminated it!
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It hardly bears thinking about it!
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Totally alien!
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A clever poem, Marsha. So true… And thanks for all the art-work.
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Thanks, Joy!
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Love your poem Marsha. This is so true for many many people.
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Sadly!
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🥲
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Excellent photos 💜💜💜 Happy New Year 🎊
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Thanks Willow. Happy New Year to you, too! 🙂
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Thank you 💜💜☺️
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