Trees Like Me

take 
my head
I will live
I bloom yearly
producing sweet fruit
Leo the late bloomer
my graying hair dyed auburn
trying to stay limber and fit
keeping my straight rows in perspective
enjoying the companionship of friends
delicate root system, tread softly
complicated integrated 
rough, dry emollient free
built rugged for long life
never showing loss
frizzy hair day
resting place
autumn
stout

Double Etheree
©Marsha Ingrao 2022


An etheree poem consists of ten lines with an increasing number of syllables, created twenty years ago my a man named Etheree Taylor Armstrong. (poor guy) The first line is a one-syllable word; the second line has two syllables, continuing until the tenth line which has ten syllables. Taking it back down to one syllable makes the poem a double etheree.


25 responses to “Bloganuary #30: Me as a Tree”

  1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

    what a beautiful poem Marsha! I love it and your pics are gorgeous like you! congrats on you bloganuary .. WoW.. that was a LOT!! 💖💖👏👏👏👏

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    1. Marsha Avatar

      I get a bit wordy!

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  2. bloggingwithjrp Avatar

    Oh, my!! You’ve taught me something. Had no idea about etherees. You should be extremely impressed with yourself.

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    1. Marsha Avatar

      LOL! Thanks, Monica. Great talking to you today. I’ll send you the link. Have a great week, and thanks for reading and commenting, my friend. 🙂

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  3. Retirement Reflections Avatar

    Brilliant poem. Very, very clever!

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    1. Marsha Avatar

      Thanks, Donna. Happy end of January! 🙂

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  4. Jim Borden Avatar

    wonderful combination of photos and your poem – well done!

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    1. Marsha Avatar

      Thanks Jim! Always accepting compliments! LOL

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      1. Jim Borden Avatar

        same here! 🙂

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        1. Marsha Avatar

          Ok, I love your sense of humor and your amazing commentary on everything you read. 🙂

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          1. Jim Borden Avatar

            I guess we’re members of the mutual admiration society 🙂

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          2. Marsha Avatar

            True dat!

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  5. Cee Neuner Avatar

    What a brilliant post. I like your tree photos and descriptions. 😀 😀

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    1. Marsha Avatar

      Brilliant, I like that! LOL

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  6. Janis @ RetirementallyChallenged.com Avatar

    I have never heard of that type of poem. Very well done!

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    1. Marsha Avatar

      Thank you, Janis. Colleen Chesebro introduced me to syllabic poetry and I enjoy writing it a lot. It does not seem quite as forced as rhymed poetry to me, although I enjoy that, too. 🙂

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  7. utesmile Avatar

    Tricky do do such a poem. Well done !

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    1. Marsha Avatar

      I felt extraordinarily pleased with myself, Ute! LOL!

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  8. Annika Perry Avatar

    Marsha, a wonderful post – the tree photos are sublime and I’m smiling at your poetic descriptions. A superb double etheree – well done for a whole month of blogging! A fantastic feat! 😀

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    1. Marsha Avatar

      Thanks so much, Anika. I missed a few days, but I quit feeling guilty about it after a while. It was a lot of fun. 🙂

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  9. Aletta - nowathome Avatar

    The poem is great! Interesting way to write it. Love the photos and descriptions

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    1. Marsha Avatar

      Thanks, Aletta. Colleen Chesebro introduced me to syllabic poetry. I enjoy the simplicity of it. I don’t think I’ve tried one of these before.

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      1. Aletta - nowathome Avatar

        Me neither! I really like it

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        1. Marsha Avatar

          I’m so glad! 🙂

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  10. Sadje Avatar

    Lovely take on the prompt Marsha. Love your poem

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