by Geoff Le Pard
Welcome to Story Chat
Friends, I want to welcome both YOU and this month’s author, Geoff Le Pard to Story Chat. This month’s Story Chat, a “who done it” police mystery, has an unsuspected twist at the end that will leave you scratching your head, or whatever itches.
I hope our author is going to write a sequel to this story. Even with the twist, there’s way more to this story than meets the eye. Read it, share it with your friends on WordPress and social media and tell us what you all think.
Detective Inspector Triblane Pettimoron pinched his nose. He had a bad feeling about this one. Mind you, he often had a bad feeling about sudden and unexplained deaths; sort of came with the territory. This was different. This felt a little too close to home.
He parked his Nissan on the verge and took a moment to assess the scene. The PC keeping the public at bay looked both bored and frozen. Beyond the tape, his sergeant, Geraint Drimple was already berating some poor sod from forensics. He felt his groin itch and resisted the urge to scratch. Psychosomatic, he felt sure. ‘Come on, Blane,’ Pettimoron chided himself, ‘this is a routine case.’ Pettimoron pushed open the car door, knowing it would be anything but that.
He stood, shoulder to shoulder with DS Drimple and winced. “Those are his, I suppose.”
Drimple nodded. “The SOCOs think they were excised pre-mortem. They don’t know if they were used to suffocate him, though.”
“Geez! Seriously? Why would someone do that?”
Drimple looked at his notes. “Seems the deceased – Dr Josiah Pretty – was a specialist in male infertility. Had a pretty good rep for curing all sorts of erectile dysfunction.” He looked up. “Maybe a dissatisfied customer.”
Pettimoron nodded and felt the itch return with a vengeance. He must not scratch.
The sergeant turned away and looked at the grand Tudor style building behind them. “He practiced from here. Looks like whoever did this was waiting for him and attacked him before he could get indoors.” He looked up at the sound of voices. The Constable waved him over and Drimple went and spoke to the woman with the PC. When he returned a few minutes later, Pettimoron had not moved, his gaze still held by the testicular gag. Drimple held a key aloft. “Cleaner. Want a quick peek?”
“What about forensics?”
“The Prof is happy. Here,” he offered blue plastic gloves and booties to his boss. He led the way. “According to Mrs. Pompous or whatever her name was, he lived on the second floor. The first comprised his consulting rooms.”
And the basement, thought Pettimoron, but kept that to himself.
As Drimple unlocked the door, he added, “We had a quick look round outside; no sign of a forced entry.” He checked a slip of paper and entered a code, stilling the alarm. “Seems like the perp didn’t break in. Where shall we start? His appointment book?”
“Probably on his computer.” Pettimoron shuddered as he saw the blue door he remembered from before. “Try that.”
If Drimple wondered why his boss had chosen that door, he did not question him, tugging it open. A light came on automatically. He disappeared inside; Pettimoron heard his sergeant as he descended the steps. He reappeared quickly. “It’s pretty clinical. There are some other doors. Want to see what’s there or do upstairs first?”
Pettimoron nodded to the basement. His sergeant stood back to let him go first.
The place was as he remembered: all while walls and tiles and sharp lighting.
Drimple moved past him and headed for the door at the far end of the room. Pettimoron waited. He was soon back. “I’m no expert but it’s a pretty neat operating theatre. There’s what I guess is a prep room and one with stores. All spotless.” He turned through 360 degrees. “I guess it’s legit.”
Pettimoron pointed at a dark corner. He worked some saliva into his mouth and managed to ask, “What’s over there?”
Drimple glanced where he pointed, narrowed his eyes and headed across. “I wonder if… oh ho. Hang on.” He smiled over his shoulder. “Your nose is working today, boss. You’d not know there was a door here unless you were right on top of it.
Pettimoron didn’t move. He listened as Drimple worked on the door, he scraping telling him he’d got it open.
Pettimoron nodded, feeling sick. While Drimple disappeared into the gloom, hunting a switch, his mind flicked back ten weeks. At the time it seemed like a consequence of the anaesthetic, the foggy image of the good doctor as he disappeared, apparently into the wall. Then he had been glad to get out, never liking anything medical, but that odd memory had stayed with him.
Drimple whistled softly as light poured out of the room. “Well, I’ll be blowed.”
As if a reluctant moth attracted to the light, Pettimoron slowly moved forward. He stopped on the room’s threshold. Each wall was lined with small specimen jars, oddly old fashioned amongst so much that was new. Even from where he stood he could see each was neatly labelled with a spidery hand.
Drimple held up one jar to the light. “Good grief, they’re balls. He kept people’s balls.” He looked at Pettimoron. “You okay, boss? You want a seat?”
Pettimoron stepped forward, shaking his head. He couldn’t say why he wasn’t surprised.
Drimple had begun to work his way down the shelving. “There must be hundreds. You think this is research or he’s just some sort of sicko?” He grinned at his boss. “Maybe the perp took umbrage and wanted his back.” The DS moved along the second wall. “It’s alphabetical.” He took another jar. “These are enormous.” He put them down. “The patients must have given permission, yes? He…” Drimple stopped, peering closely at a jar.
Pettimoron’s heart stopped. The itch was beyond intolerable and, despite himself his hand reached down and scratched as Drimple turned to him, a curiously pitying expression on his face.
“This has your name on it, sir?” The sergeant’s gaze dropped to where Pettimoron’s hand had gone. “Or someone else with your name.”
Pettimoron nodded. They both knew, given his name that the chances of that were miniscule; about as likely as any man failing to notice he’d lost a testicle. “He didn’t have permission, sergeant.”
“Gives us a motive, boss. And…”
Pettimoron looked up.
“I’ll not say.” He held out the jar. “Not a word.”
Pettimoron held Drimple’s gaze. They both knew that was a lie.
Geoff Le Pard was born in 1956 and is a lawyer who saw the light, and started writing in 2006 following a summer school course. As a course junkie, he has tried Arvon, a Birkbeck College evening class and summer school and, latterly, an MA at Sheffield Hallam.
Le Pard has many likes and interests including cooking; passion for walking with Dog and exploring the outside world as he ponders his life. He enjoys toiling as a jobbing gardener under the Textiliste’s careful instruction; reading of the good, the bad and the indifferent in fiction. As the boy scout picture above suggests, Le Pard volunteers his time. He follows many sports (as long as no horses are involved); Darkened theatres and cinemas draw him in as he hopes that he is exhilarated and not anaesthetized. He also enjoys dancing both ballroom and Latin.
Le Pard lives in and loves London.
Books Available by Geoff Le Pard
Geoff Le Pard started writing to entertain in 2006. He hasn’t left his keyboard since. When he’s not churning out novels he writes some maudlin self-indulgent poetry, short fiction and blogs at geofflepard.com. He walks the dog for mutual inspiration and most of his best ideas come out of these strolls. He also cooks with passion if not precision.
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In this, the second book in the Harry Spittle Sagas, it’s 1981 and Harry is training to be a solicitor. His private life is a bit of a mess and he’s far from convinced the law is for him. Then an old acquaintance from his hotel days appears demanding Harry write his will. When he dies somewhat mysteriously a few days later and leaves Harry in charge of sorting out his affairs, Harry soon realises this will be no ordinary piece of work. After all, his now deceased client inherited a criminal empire and several people are very interested in what is to become of it.
The third instalment of the Harry Spittle Sagas moves on the 1987. Harry is now a senior lawyer with a well-regarded City of London firm, aspiring to a partnership. However, one evening Harry finds the head of the Private Client department dead over his desk, in a very compromising situation. The senior partner offers to sort things out, to avoid Harry embarrassment but soon matters take a sinister turn and Harry is fighting for his career, his freedom and eventually his life as he wrestles with dilemma on dilemma. Will Harry save the day? Will he save himself?
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Now it is your turn. Pour a cup of tea or coffee, glass of wine, and sit back with your friends and dive into the story. This is your chance to ask the author questions, interact with each other. It’s up to you. What makes this story tick? Who killed the doctor?