This week’s theme for Colleen’s poetry challenge is a haiku written by Sue Vincent:
clouds cover the moon, beyond dawn's pale horizon sun rises unseen ©2020 Sue Vincent
The idea is to use Sue’s haiku as inspiration for your own syllabic poetry. Remember, in this challenge we can use any of the following poetry forms: Haiku, Senryu, Haiga, Tanka, Gogyohka, Renga, Solo-Renga, Haibun, Tanka Prose, Cinquain, and its variations, Etheree, Nonet, and Shadorma

The current standards for creating Haiku in English suggest a form with three lines and syllables of 3/5/3 (11 syllables). Even the more abbreviated haiku version with three lines and syllables of 2/3/2 (7 syllables) is now thought of more favorably than the traditional 5/7/5 format. Hybrid haiku are written with seventeen-syllables in one or more lines.
Most haiku are written about nature, the seasons, a beautiful moment in nature, an emotional experience while in nature, or change. A haiku should share a special moment of awareness with the reader.
mist meets earth shrouding streets in gloom foggy night by Marsha Ingrao 2020
Revival of Colleen Chesebro’s Writer’s Quote Wednesday Writer’s Challenge

Colleen Chesebro invited me to reinstate the #WQWWC challenge she used to host with her blogger friend, Ronovan. They eventually chose to focus on poetry and so she opened it up to me to take up the challenge.
#WQWWC will start this Wednesday, December 2nd. Stay tuned for the first theme.

Blog Challenge Interview Series
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4 responses to “#Haiku: “Melancholy Autumn””
You are always so creative, Marsha! Wishing you a lovely Sunday.
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Thank you Leya. Happy Sunday to you, too.
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When did the syllable counts change? I am a fan of the 5/7/5 format. Writing in a 2/3/2 structure sure says a lot about being concise.
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That is a good question for Colleen. She is a haiku expert. I am a neophyte. I made a mistake on my count in the one that I used as my featured picture. I like the way it sounds better, but it has too many syllables. Sometimes, when I’m counting, I look at number of words and forget that one word has two syllables. Do you ever do that?
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