Marsha & Kalev
This is me, not ten-year old Jenny, but I love dogs, especially rescued ones. None of Kalev’s toys provide incentive for trying on a new raincoat and hat.

Ten year-old Jenny Hatfield resents her dad for moving her family to the Southern end of the Willamette Valley to take a new job. She hasn’t lived in Pine Forest, Oregon three days before she detests it. Her friends and family live in Portland, Oregon. The kids in the rural logging town are mean. The dreary November weather overshadows her sunny spirit.

Ongoing family problems crescendo after the move. The love she craves the most, from her father, continues to elude her. Born with a double cleft lip, (yeah, that part is me – only.1% of the U.S. population would know what it’s like.) Jenny confirms her unspoken sense that her father’s disappointment in her imperfection drives his constant criticism of her. After spending her life trying to win his approval, she runs out of ideas.

Riding her bike home from school on windy Millwood Drive, Jenny saves an Airedale/Poodle puppy from certain death. She hopes her life in Pine Forest will take a turn for the better. Her neighbor, son of a logger, Todd Paul, happens along to help her. He seems like a promising friend until the class debate begins and Sandy Lassiter moves into their trailer park.

Always fighting for what seems right, Jenny finds herself scrambling to find someone in her class who wants to join her team in the class debate. When choosing sides, she never considered that anyone in the enlightened era of the 1970s would choose not to protect the environment. In the rural logging town of Pine Forest livelihoods hung in the balance over the national debate between protecting the endangered white spotted owl and the local economics of the logging industry. Emotions sparked flames she had not anticipated.

 

Not you , Kalev.
Not you , Kalev.

She finds love and acceptance where it is, and stops struggling to produce it where it is not.

So now the title problem remains. Catchy titles help sell books. Will the title A New Home For Wynn work? I brainstormed another, but what you think?

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10 responses to “Choosing a Title for Your Novel”

  1. Sorry to put a damper on your story but it sounds too much like Because of Winn-Dixie. It’s about a dog that befriends a girl who has moved into a new town (in Florida). There’s also a trailer park in this story.

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    1. Good to know. I’ll read it.

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  2. It sounds like a great story. My favourite uncle is one of the .1%( but we are in Canada) and he became a speech therapist. The title is touchy…a thought or word from your ending aligned with Wynn may be an idea. I like titles that make me curious to find out what the title is about which I can only figure out if I read the entire book. That’s my 2 cents.

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  3. Sounds like a great story! Based on the synopsis, I was suprised to see the title is about the dog, though. Is this a girl rescues dog and then the dog rescues the girl story? If so maybe get them both in the title. And I agree that rescued dogs are the best!

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    1. Yeah, it’s more about her than the dog anyway, but the dog is part of her healing.

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    2. Thanks Debbie, as usual, you give great advice. Do you have a WP account? I looked at lots of your FB posts, and I thought you wrote a blog, but I couldn’t find it. 🙂

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  4. The puppy is called Wynn, Marsha?
    If so: then your title, or, Wynn, or, Wynn’s Woods 🐵

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    1. Yes, the puppy is Wynn. Thanks Chris.

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  5. Wow, this story is sounding great.

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    1. Thanks ET 🙂 Let’s hope. I’ve slowed way down because of traveling.

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